๐Ÿ‡ฐ๐Ÿ‡ท Lesson 22: Opinion & Argument

Sooner or later a Korean friend, colleague or teacher turns to you and asks ๋„Œ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด? โ€” about working from home, about plastic cups in cafรฉs, about whether children should have smartphones. At A2 you could answer ์ข‹์•„์š” or ์‹ซ์–ด์š”. At B2 you are expected to say what you think, why, give an example, concede a point to the other side and land on a conclusion. And at the end of the TOPIK II writing paper, question 54 asks you to do exactly that on paper, in 600โ€“700 characters of ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด.

This lesson gives you the building blocks for both: the spoken phrases for discussions and debates, the written connectors that hold an essay together, and a step-by-step plan for TOPIK writing questions 53 and 54.

๐Ÿง  The Mental Model: Four Bricks of an Argument

Whatever the language, a persuasive argument is built from the same four bricks. Korean simply gives each brick its own set of stock phrases, and examiners and listeners expect to hear them.

BrickJobTypical Korean signal
์ฃผ์žฅ (claim)What you think-๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค, -์•„์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค
๊ทผ๊ฑฐ (reason)Why you think it์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด โ€ฆ -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค, ์ฒซ์งธ/๋‘˜์งธ
์˜ˆ์‹œ (example)Proof from real life์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ
๊ฒฐ๋ก  (conclusion)Pull it together, say what should happen๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ, ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ, -์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค

One more brick makes an argument sound mature rather than stubborn: the concession (์–‘๋ณด) โ€” admitting the other side has a point before explaining why you still disagree. In Korean that is ๋ฌผ๋ก  โ€ฆ -์ง€๋งŒ, or -(์œผ)ใ„ด/๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์ด๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ โ€ฆ

๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ Stating an Opinion: From Soft to Firm

You already know -๋‹ค๊ณ  from reported speech (Lessons 2โ€“3). Opinions are simply reported speech about your own mind: ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด์š”, ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด์š”, ์ค„์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด์š”. What changes is how strongly you commit.

StrengthKoreanEnglishWhere
Very soft์ด ์ •์ฑ…์€ ์กฐ๊ธˆ ์„ฑ๊ธ‰ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์‹ถ์–ด์š”.I wonder if this policy isn't a bit hasty.talking to seniors
Soft์ œ ์ƒ๊ฐ์—๋Š” ์žฌํƒ๊ทผ๋ฌด๊ฐ€ ๋” ํšจ์œจ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”.I think working from home is more efficient.everyday chat
Neutral์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ณด๊ธฐ์—๋Š” ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋น„์‹ธ์š”.As I see it, the price is too high.everyday chat
Standard์ €๋Š” ๋Œ€์ค‘๊ตํ†ต ์š”๊ธˆ์„ ์˜ฌ๋ ค์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I believe public transport fares should go up.meetings, debates
Firm์ €๋Š” ์ด ์ œ๋„์— ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I am against this system.debates
Written์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„์˜ ๊ฒŒ์ž„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ์ œํ•œํ•  ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ณธ๋‹ค.I believe it is necessary to limit teenagers' gaming time.essays, columns

๐Ÿ’ก Why Koreans Hedge So Much in Speech

In conversation, especially with someone older or higher-ranking, a bare ์ €๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค can sound confrontational. Korean speakers often wrap opinions in ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” or -์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ์š”? so that the listener can disagree without anyone losing face. That's politeness, not uncertainty. But on paper the logic flips: an essay full of ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค sounds as if the writer doesn't know what they think. Hedge in speech, commit in writing.

Agreeing, disagreeing and conceding

FunctionKoreanEnglish
Agree๊ทธ ์ ์—๋Š” ์ €๋„ ๋™์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I agree with you on that point.
Agree์ €๋„ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I think the same.
Partly agree์–ด๋А ์ •๋„๋Š” ๋งž๋Š” ๋ง์”€์ด์ง€๋งŒ, ๋‹ค๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.That's true up to a point, but it can be seen differently.
Disagree politely์ฃ„์†กํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ์˜๊ฒฌ์—๋Š” ๋™์˜ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I'm sorry, but I find it hard to agree with that view.
Concede๋ฌผ๋ก  ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒโ€ฆOf course it's true that there are costs. Butโ€ฆ
Challenge gently๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ปค์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ์š”?Wouldn't that actually make the problem bigger?
Acknowledge์ข‹์€ ์ง€์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.That's a good point.
Clarify์ œ ๋ง์”€์€ ๊ธˆ์ง€ํ•˜์ž๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์ค„์ด์ž๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.What I mean is not that we should ban it, but that we should reduce it.

Notice ์ œ ๋ง์”€์€ in the last line: ๋ง์”€ is humble when it refers to your own words (Lesson 20), so it's the polite way to restate your point in a formal debate.

๐Ÿ’ฌ Dialogue: A Classroom Debate

SpeakerKoreanEnglish
์‚ฌํšŒ์ž์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ํ† ๋ก  ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” '์นดํŽ˜ ์•ˆ ์ผํšŒ์šฉ ์ปต ์‚ฌ์šฉ ๊ธˆ์ง€'์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฏผ์ง€ ์”จ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋ง์”€ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”?Today's debate topic is "banning disposable cups inside cafรฉs." Minji, would you start by giving your opinion?
๋ฏผ์ง€๋„ค. ์ €๋Š” ์ผํšŒ์šฉ ์ปต ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ๊ธˆ์ง€ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ฒ„๋ ค์ง€๋Š” ์ปต ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์žฌํ™œ์šฉ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.Yes. I think disposable cups should be banned, because most discarded cups are never recycled.
์ œ์ด์Šจ๊ทธ ์ ์—๋Š” ์ €๋„ ๋™์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ „๋ฉด ๊ธˆ์ง€๋Š” ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์„ฑ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž‘์€ ์นดํŽ˜๋“ค์€ ์ปต์„ ์”ป์„ ์ธ๋ ฅ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.I agree on that point. But I think a total ban is too hasty, because small cafรฉs don't have enough staff to wash cups.
๋ฏผ์ง€๋ฌผ๋ก  ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์–ด๋ ค์›€์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€๋งŒ ์ •๋ถ€๊ฐ€ ์„ธ์ฒ™ ๋น„์šฉ์„ ์ง€์›ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ์š”?Of course it's true there are difficulties like that. But couldn't it be solved if the government subsidised the washing costs?
์ œ์ด์Šจ์ข‹์€ ์ง€์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ์ €๋Š” ๊ธˆ์ง€๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ฐœ์ธ ์ปต์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ค๋Š” ์†๋‹˜์—๊ฒŒ ํ• ์ธ์„ ๋Š˜๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋จผ์ €๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.Good point. Still, I think increasing discounts for customers who bring their own cup should come before a ban.
์‚ฌํšŒ์ž๋‘ ๋ถ„ ๋ชจ๋‘ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ๋ณดํ˜ธํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ฐ์—๋Š” ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”. ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์— ์ฐจ์ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๋ฟ์ด๊ตฐ์š”.You both agree that we need to protect the environment. You only differ on the method.

Every brick is there โ€” claim, reason, concession, gentle challenge โ€” plus ๋‹ค๋งŒ ("only, however"), a softer "but" that adds a limitation rather than flatly contradicting.

๐Ÿ”— Connectors That Hold an Argument Together

Connecting adverbs are the skeleton of an essay. Examiners look for them because they show the reader how each sentence relates to the last. Most have a conversational twin; the essay version is more formal.

JobEssay / formalConversationExample
Adding๋˜ํ•œ, ๋ฟ๋งŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ , ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€์šด๋™์€ ๊ฑด๊ฐ•์— ์ข‹๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ค„์—ฌ ์ค€๋‹ค.
Contrast๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜, ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด(์—), ์ด์™€ ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ๋„์‹œ๋Š” ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์‹œ๊ณจ์€ ์กฐ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณต๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋ง‘๋‹ค.
Result๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ, ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ, ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ์ถœ์ƒ๋ฅ ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ํ•™์ƒ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์ค„๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค.
Reason์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด โ€ฆ -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด โ€ฆ -๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•œ๋‹ค. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ํฌ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค.
Example์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ์˜ˆ์ปจ๋Œ€, ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๊ฐœ์ธ ์ปต์„ ์“ฐ๋ฉด ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์ค„์–ด๋“ ๋‹ค.
Restating์ฆ‰, ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•ด๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ1์ธ ๊ฐ€๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์ฆ‰ ํ˜ผ์ž ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋งŽ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค.
Ordering์šฐ์„ , ์ฒซ์งธ, ๋‘˜์งธ, ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ๋จผ์ €, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ ์ฒซ์งธ, ๋น„์šฉ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘˜์งธ, ์ธ๋ ฅ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๋‹ค.
Concluding๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์š”์ปจ๋Œ€, ์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ๊ฒฐ๊ตญ์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์—๋Š” ์žฅ์ ๊ณผ ๋‹จ์ ์ด ๋ชจ๋‘ ์žˆ๋‹ค.

Which one? The connectors learners mix up

PairThe difference
๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— vs ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜/ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— sets two sides side by side ("whereas"): ๋„์‹œ๋Š” ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์‹œ๊ณจ์€ ์กฐ์šฉํ•˜๋‹ค. It can't express "but, contrary to expectation": โœ— ๋น„๊ฐ€ ์™”๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์†Œํ’์„ ๊ฐ”๋‹ค. โ†’ โœ“ ๋น„๊ฐ€ ์™”๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์†Œํ’์„ ๊ฐ”๋‹ค.
๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ vs ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ vs ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ is everyday "so". ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ("accordingly") and ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ ("therefore") are written and formal; ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ feels a little more like a logical deduction. In essays, ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ and ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ are usually interchangeable.
๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ vs ๋˜ํ•œBoth add a point. ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ("on top of that") piles on something extra, often stronger, and is common in speech; ๋˜ํ•œ is the neutral essay word. ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ is fine in essays too โ€” just don't use it for every addition.
์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด โ€ฆ vs -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด opens a separate sentence and must close with -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค (or -๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š” in speech). -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— joins the reason to the same sentence. Don't use both in one clause: โœ— ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์šฉ์ด ํฌ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•œ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿงฑ Essay Grammar: Patterns That Carry Argument

PatternMeaningExample
-๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค / ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹คit is important / necessary toโ€ฆ๋ฌด์—‡๋ณด๋‹ค ์–ด๋ฆด ๋•Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์Šต๊ด€์„ ๊ธฐ๋ฅด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค.
-(์œผ)ใ„น ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹คthere is a need toโ€ฆ์ •๋ถ€๋Š” ์ง€์› ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์„ ๋งˆ๋ จํ•  ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค.
-๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” โ€ฆ -์•„์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹คin order toโ€ฆ, one mustโ€ฆ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์‹œ๋ฏผ์˜ ์ฐธ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค.
-์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹คwe ought toโ€ฆ (formal conclusion)์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๋ชจ๋‘ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํ˜ธ์— ํž˜์จ์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค.
-(์œผ)ใ„น ์ˆ˜๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋‹คcannot help butโ€ฆ, inevitablyโ€ฆ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ๋ฐœ์ „ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ผ๋ถ€ ์ผ์ž๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ค„ ์ˆ˜๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋‹ค.
N์— ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์น˜๋‹คto affect N์ˆ˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€์กฑ์€ ํ•™์—… ์„ฑ์ ์— ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์นœ๋‹ค.
-๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋‹คto help withโ€ฆ๋…์„œ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋ ฅ์„ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋œ๋‹ค.
-(์œผ)ใ„ด/๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์ด๋‹คit is true thatโ€ฆ (concession)์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์ˆ˜์—…์ด ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์ด๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค.
-๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹คit can be said thatโ€ฆ๊ต์œก์€ ์‚ฌํšŒ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๊พธ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ํž˜์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿ’ก -์•„์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค vs -์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค

์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์•„๊ปด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค โ€” a direct statement of obligation: "We must save energy."

์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์•„๊ปด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค โ€” the same obligation, framed as a considered conclusion: "We will need to / ought to save energy." It sounds measured and is a favourite for the last sentence of an essay. Use -์•„์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค in the body and save -์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค for the finish, so it keeps its weight.

๐Ÿ“ TOPIK II Writing: What Questions 51โ€“54 Ask

The TOPIK II writing paper has four questions and 50 minutes. The first two test sentence-level accuracy; the last two test whether you can organise real written Korean. Questions 53 and 54 carry most of the writing score, and both must be written in ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด.

QuestionTaskLengthPoints
51Fill two blanks in a practical text (notice, email, message) โ€” match its styleone sentence per blank10
52Fill two blanks in an explanatory paragraph (usually ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด)one sentence per blank10
53Describe a chart, graph or survey result200โ€“300 characters30
54Opinion essay on a social topic, answering the guiding questions600โ€“700 characters50

Answers to 53 and 54 are written on a ์›๊ณ ์ง€ grid (manuscript paper): one character per square, spaces take a square, and each paragraph starts with one empty square. The character counts above include spaces. The official scoring looks at three broad areas โ€” content and task completion (did you answer everything asked?), organisation (is it logically structured, with good connectors?) and language use (range and accuracy of grammar and vocabulary, appropriate written style). The exact marks inside each area are the examiners' business; your job is to hit all three.

Question 53: describe the data, don't judge it

Question 53 gives you a survey or trend chart. Your job is to report it objectively: who was surveyed, what the results were, and any causes or outlook the chart shows. Leave your own opinion out.

StepUseful Korean
Introduce the surveyโ€ฆ์—์„œ 20๋Œ€ 500๋ช…์„ ๋Œ€์ƒ์œผ๋กœ โ€ฆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์กฐ์‚ฌํ•˜์˜€๋‹ค.
Top result๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ 'โ€ฆ'์ด/๊ฐ€ 42%๋กœ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋†’๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ๋‹ค.
Next results๊ทธ ๋’ค๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด 'โ€ฆ'์ด/๊ฐ€ 25%, 'โ€ฆ'์ด/๊ฐ€ 12%๋กœ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ๋‹ค.
Change over time2015๋…„ 1๋งŒ ๋ช…์—์„œ 2025๋…„ 3๋งŒ ๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ์„ธ ๋ฐฐ ์ฆ๊ฐ€ํ•˜์˜€๋‹ค.
Comparison๋‚จ์„ฑ์€ โ€ฆ์ธ ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ์„ฑ์€ โ€ฆ(์œผ)๋กœ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ๋‹ค.
Causes shown์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ณ€ํ™”์˜ ์›์ธ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” โ€ฆ์„/๋ฅผ ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค.
Outlook shown์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ถ”์„ธ๊ฐ€ ๊ณ„์†๋œ๋‹ค๋ฉด 2030๋…„์—๋Š” โ€ฆ์— ์ด๋ฅผ ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค.
Model opening for question 53English
ํ•œ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์†Œ์—์„œ 20๋Œ€ ๋‚จ๋…€ 500๋ช…์„ ๋Œ€์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ์—ฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์ฃผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋Š” ํ™œ๋™์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์กฐ์‚ฌํ•˜์˜€๋‹ค. ๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ '๋™์˜์ƒ ์‹œ์ฒญ'์ด 42%๋กœ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋†’๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ๊ทธ ๋’ค๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด '์šด๋™'์ด 25%, '๋…์„œ'๊ฐ€ 12%๋กœ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ๋‹ค.A research institute surveyed 500 men and women in their twenties about what they mainly do in their free time. "Watching videos" came out highest at 42%, followed by "exercise" at 25% and "reading" at 12%.

Question 54: plan before you write

Question 54 gives a short background statement and usually two or three guiding questions. The instructions tell you to write 600โ€“700 characters and not to copy the prompt word for word โ€” so rephrase the background in your own words. The single most reliable structure is one paragraph per guiding question, framed by an introduction and a conclusion. Spend five minutes on an outline; it saves you from running out of squares halfway through your argument.

Sample prompt (original, TOPIK-style)English
์ตœ๊ทผ ์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„์˜ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์•„๋ž˜์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ '์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„์˜ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์“ฐ๋ผ. โ‘  ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์˜ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๋ฉด์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€? โ‘ก ์ง€๋‚˜์นœ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€? โ‘ข ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ค ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ๊ฐ€?Teenagers' smartphone use has risen sharply recently. Write your opinion on "teenagers' smartphone use", focusing on the following: โ‘  What are the positive sides of smartphone use? โ‘ก What problems does excessive use cause? โ‘ข What efforts are needed to solve these problems?
ParagraphJobNotes (in Korean, as you'd jot them)Approx. length
์„œ๋ก Background + topic์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ = ์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„ ์ƒํ™œ์˜ ํ•„์ˆ˜ํ’ˆ / ์‚ฌ์šฉ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ์ฆ๊ฐ€ โ†’ ์žฅ๋‹จ์ ์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ํ•„์š”100โ€“120์ž
๋ณธ๋ก  1Guiding question โ‘ ์ •๋ณด ๊ฒ€์ƒ‰, ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ํ•™์Šต / ์นœ๊ตฌ์™€์˜ ์†Œํ†ต, ์ทจ๋ฏธ ํ™œ๋™170โ€“190์ž
๋ณธ๋ก  2Guiding question โ‘ก์ˆ˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€์กฑ โ†’ ์ง‘์ค‘๋ ฅ ์ €ํ•˜ / ๋Œ€๋ฉด ์†Œํ†ต ๊ฐ์†Œ / ์‚ฌ์ด๋ฒ„ ํญ๋ ฅ170โ€“190์ž
๊ฒฐ๋ก Guiding question โ‘ข + your position๊ฐ€์ •: ์‚ฌ์šฉ ๊ทœ์น™ / ํ•™๊ต: ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด ๊ต์œก / ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์กฐ์ ˆํ•˜๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€ โ†’ ๊ธˆ์ง€๋ณด๋‹ค ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ•150โ€“170์ž

That plan adds up to roughly 600โ€“670 characters โ€” inside the target with room to spare. Here is how ๋ณธ๋ก  2 might look written out in full:

Model paragraph (๋ณธ๋ก  2)
๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์„ ์ง€๋‚˜์น˜๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ธด๋‹ค. ์šฐ์„  ๋Šฆ์€ ๋ฐค๊นŒ์ง€ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์„ ๋ณด๋А๋ผ ์ž ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•ด์ง€๊ณ , ๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ ์ˆ˜์—… ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์›Œ์ง„๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋Š˜์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์นœ๊ตฌ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€์กฑ๊ณผ ์ง์ ‘ ์–ผ๊ตด์„ ๋ณด๋ฉฐ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ์ค„์–ด๋“ ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Š” ์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„์˜ ์‚ฌํšŒ์„ฑ ๋ฐœ๋‹ฌ์— ๋ถ€์ •์ ์ธ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์น  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์ต๋ช…์„ฑ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์‚ฌ์ด๋ฒ„ ํญ๋ ฅ์˜ ํ”ผํ•ด๋ฅผ ์ž…๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค.
English translation

However, using a smartphone excessively causes several problems. First, teenagers lose sleep because they are on their phones until late at night, and as a result it becomes hard to concentrate in class. In addition, while online conversations increase, the time spent talking face to face with friends and family decreases. This can have a negative effect on teenagers' social development. On top of that, because of anonymity, quite a few suffer from cyberbullying.

๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ turns from the positives of ๋ณธ๋ก  1, ์šฐ์„  โ€ฆ ๋˜ํ•œ โ€ฆ ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ orders three problems, and every sentence ends in ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด. A matching conclusion might open: ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ๋ฌด์กฐ๊ฑด ๋ง‰๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๊ฐ€๋ฅด์ณ์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค.

โœ… TOPIK 54 Checklist

โ˜ Every guiding question answered, each in its own paragraph

โ˜ Background rephrased, not copied from the prompt

โ˜ ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด from the first sentence to the last โ€” no -์š”, no -์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค

โ˜ At least one connector at the start of each paragraph (๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜, ๋˜ํ•œ, ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œโ€ฆ)

โ˜ A clear position in the conclusion (-์•„์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค)

โ˜ 600โ€“700 characters including spaces; indent each paragraph by one square

๐Ÿ‡ฐ๐Ÿ‡ท Culture note: Korean students practise structured argument in ๋…ผ์ˆ  (essay writing), which some universities use in admissions, and in school ํ† ๋ก  (debate) classes. The expected shape โ€” background, clear claim, reasons with examples, concession, conclusion โ€” is exactly what TOPIK 54 rewards. In everyday conversation, though, Koreans usually signal disagreement indirectly, especially with seniors: ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์€๋ฐ์š”โ€ฆ or ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๋” ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ณด๋ฉด ์–ด๋–จ๊นŒ์š”? often means "I disagree."

๐Ÿ“ฐ Reading: A Newspaper Column

์นผ๋Ÿผ
์ฃผ 4์ผ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ œ, ์ด์ œ๋Š” ๋…ผ์˜ํ•  ๋•Œ๋‹ค
์ตœ๊ทผ ์ผ๋ถ€ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์ฃผ 4์ผ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ œ๋ฅผ ์‹œ๋ฒ”์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์ด ๋†’์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์ฐฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์ชฝ์€ ํœด์‹ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋Š˜์–ด๋‚˜๋ฉด ์ง์›๋“ค์˜ ๋งŒ์กฑ๋„์™€ ์—…๋ฌด ํšจ์œจ์ด ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋†’์•„์ง„๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•œ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ด ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ๋„์ž…ํ•œ ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์—์„œ๋Š” ์ƒ์‚ฐ์„ฑ์ด ๋–จ์–ด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์€ ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฌ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์ค‘์†Œ๊ธฐ์—…๋“ค์€ ์ธ๋ ฅ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•ด ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ ์„ ์ค„์ด๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•œ๋‹ค. ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์—…์ข…์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ๋Š” ๊ทผ๋ฌด ์ผ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ž์ฒด๊ฐ€ ๋ถˆ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๋„ ์žˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋ชจ๋“  ํšŒ์‚ฌ์— ๊ฐ™์€ ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•์š”ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์—…์ข…๋ณ„ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ ์ธ ๋„์ž…์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค.
English translation

The four-day week: time to discuss it. Interest in the four-day working week has been growing recently as some companies introduce it on a trial basis. Supporters argue that when rest time increases, employees' satisfaction and work efficiency rise together. In fact, one company that introduced the system found that productivity did not fall. On the other hand, small and medium-sized businesses say that they are short of staff and find it hard to cut working days. On top of that, in some industries reducing the number of working days is impossible in itself. Therefore, rather than forcing the same system on every company, a gradual introduction that takes each industry's situation into account is needed. We should remember that what matters is not how long we work but how we work.

โš ๏ธ Common Mistakes

1. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด with no ending to match. โœ— ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ ๋‹ค. โ†’ โœ“ ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค.

2. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— as a general "but". โœ— ์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ–ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— ์‹œํ—˜์— ๋–จ์–ด์กŒ๋‹ค. โ†’ โœ“ ์—ด์‹ฌํžˆ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ–ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์‹œํ—˜์— ๋–จ์–ด์กŒ๋‹ค.

3. Speech habits in the essay. โœ— ์ œ ์ƒ๊ฐ์—๋Š” ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. โ†’ โœ“ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•˜๋‹ค.

4. Double hedging. โœ— ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค ("I think it seems important"). Choose one: ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค.

5. Forgetting ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  after a noun. โœ— ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜ํ’ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค โ†’ โœ“ ํ•„์ˆ˜ํ’ˆ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค.

6. Unbalanced paragraphs in TOPIK 54. Spending 400 characters on guiding question โ‘  leaves no room for โ‘ข. Plan the lengths first.

โœ๏ธ Practice

Exercise 1 โ€” Turn it into an opinion with -๋‹ค๊ณ 

  1. ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํ˜ธ๊ฐ€ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค โ†’ ์ €๋Š” ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํ˜ธ๊ฐ€ _____ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (Answer: ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ )
  2. ์ •๋ถ€๊ฐ€ ์ง€์›์„ ๋Š˜๋ ค์•ผ ํ•˜๋‹ค โ†’ ์ €๋Š” ์ •๋ถ€๊ฐ€ ์ง€์›์„ _____ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (Answer: ๋Š˜๋ ค์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ )
  3. ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜ํ’ˆ์ด๋‹ค โ†’ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์ด _____ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค. (Answer: ํ•„์ˆ˜ํ’ˆ์ด๋ผ๊ณ )
  4. ์ด ์ •์ฑ…์€ ํšจ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ์—†๋‹ค โ†’ ๋‚˜๋Š” ์ด ์ •์ฑ…์ด ํšจ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ _____ ๋ณธ๋‹ค. (Answer: ์—†๋‹ค๊ณ )
  5. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์šด๋™์„ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค โ†’ ์š”์ฆ˜ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์šด๋™์„ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ํ•˜์ง€ _____ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค. (Answer: ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค๊ณ )
  6. ๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ์ •์€ ์˜ณ์•˜๋‹ค โ†’ ๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ์ •์ด _____ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค. (past) (Answer: ์˜ณ์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ )

Exercise 2 โ€” Choose the connector

  1. ๋„์‹œ๋Š” ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‹ค. _____ ์‹œ๊ณจ์€ ์กฐ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณต๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋ง‘๋‹ค. (whereas) (Answer: ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—|๋ฐ˜๋ฉด)
  2. ์šด๋™์€ ๊ฑด๊ฐ•์— ์ข‹๋‹ค. _____ ์ŠคํŠธ๋ ˆ์Šค๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋Š” ๋ฐ์—๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋œ๋‹ค. (furthermore) (Answer: ๋˜ํ•œ|๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€)
  3. ์ถœ์ƒ๋ฅ ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. _____ ํ•™์ƒ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์ค„๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. (therefore, formal) (Answer: ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ|๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ)
  4. ์ผํšŒ์šฉํ’ˆ์„ ์ค„์—ฌ์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค. _____ ์นดํŽ˜์—์„œ ๊ฐœ์ธ ์ปต์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค. (for example) (Answer: ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด|์˜ˆ์ปจ๋Œ€)
  5. ๋‚˜๋Š” ์ด ์ œ๋„์— ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•œ๋‹ค. _____ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค. (because โ€” opens the sentence) (Answer: ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด)
  6. 1์ธ ๊ฐ€๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. _____ ํ˜ผ์ž ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋งŽ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์ด๋‹ค. (in other words) (Answer: ์ฆ‰|๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•ด)
  7. _____ ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๋ชจ๋‘์˜ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. (in conclusion) (Answer: ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ|์š”์ปจ๋Œ€)

Exercise 3 โ€” Essay grammar

  1. ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์ •๋ถ€์™€ ์‹œ๋ฏผ์ด ํ•จ๊ป˜ _____. (๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๋‹ค, formal conclusion "ought to") (Answer: ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค)
  2. ๋ฌด์—‡๋ณด๋‹ค ์–ด๋ฆด ๋•Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์Šต๊ด€์„ _____ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. (๊ธฐ๋ฅด๋‹ค) (Answer: ๊ธฐ๋ฅด๋Š”)
  3. ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ด ๋ฐœ์ „ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ผ๋ถ€ ์ผ์ž๋ฆฌ๋Š” _____ ์ˆ˜๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋‹ค. (to decrease) (Answer: ์ค„|์ค„์–ด๋“ค|๊ฐ์†Œํ• )
  4. ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์ˆ˜์—…์ด ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ _____์ด๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค๋Š” ๋‹จ์ ๋„ ์žˆ๋‹ค. (fact โ€” concession) (Answer: ์‚ฌ์‹ค)
  5. ์ˆ˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€์กฑ์€ ํ•™์—… ์„ฑ์ ์— ๋‚˜์œ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ _____. (๋ฏธ์น˜๋‹ค, ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด present) (Answer: ๋ฏธ์นœ๋‹ค)
  6. ์ •๋ถ€๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ง€์› ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์„ ๋งˆ๋ จํ•  _____ ์žˆ๋‹ค. (need) (Answer: ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€)

Exercise 4 โ€” From conversation to essay style

  1. ์ œ ์ƒ๊ฐ์—๋Š” ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. โ†’ ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ _____. (no hedge, ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด) (Answer: ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•˜๋‹ค)
  2. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์•„๊ปด์•ผ ๋ผ์š”. โ†’ _____ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ์•„๊ปด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค. (formal "therefore") (Answer: ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ|๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ)
  3. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์•ผ ๋ผ์š”. โ†’ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์— ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ _____. (ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด "must") (Answer: ๊ฐ€์ ธ์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค)
  4. ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ˆ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ค๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. โ†’ ์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด _____. (๋“ค๋‹ค + -๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค) (Answer: ๋“ค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค)
  5. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ’€ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? โ†’ ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ _____? (written -๋Š”๊ฐ€ question) (Answer: ์žˆ๋Š”๊ฐ€)
  6. ์ž‘์€ ๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ๋“ค์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. โ†’ ์ž‘์€ ๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ๋“ค์€ _____์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๋‹ค. (staff, workforce) (Answer: ์ธ๋ ฅ)

Exercise 5 โ€” Reading comprehension

  1. ์ผ๋ถ€ ๊ธฐ์—…์€ ์ฃผ 4์ผ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ œ๋ฅผ _____์œผ๋กœ ๋„์ž…ํ–ˆ๋‹ค. (on a trial basis) (Answer: ์‹œ๋ฒ”์ )
  2. ์ฐฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์ชฝ์€ ํœด์‹์ด ๋Š˜๋ฉด ๋งŒ์กฑ๋„์™€ ์—…๋ฌด _____์ด ๋†’์•„์ง„๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•œ๋‹ค. (Answer: ํšจ์œจ)
  3. ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ๋„์ž…ํ•œ ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์—์„œ๋Š” _____์ด ๋–จ์–ด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์•˜๋‹ค. (Answer: ์ƒ์‚ฐ์„ฑ)
  4. ์ค‘์†Œ๊ธฐ์—…๋“ค์€ _____์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•ด์„œ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ ์„ ์ค„์ด๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•œ๋‹ค. (Answer: ์ธ๋ ฅ)
  5. ๊ธ€์“ด์ด๋Š” ์—…์ข…๋ณ„ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•œ _____ ๋„์ž…์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•œ๋‹ค. (gradual) (Answer: ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ ์ธ|๋‹จ๊ณ„์ )
  6. ๊ธ€์“ด์ด์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” _____์ด๋‹ค. (Answer: ๋ฐฉ์‹)

๐Ÿง  Check Your Understanding

Q1: Which sentence belongs in a TOPIK 54 essay?

Q2: Which use of ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์— is correct?

Q3: What does TOPIK II writing question 53 ask you to do?

Q4: In a debate you want to concede a point before disagreeing. Which is best?

โ“ Common Questions

Can I write ๋‚˜๋Š” in a TOPIK essay?

Yes โ€” ๋‚˜๋Š” (never ์ €๋Š”, which is a speech form) is acceptable in a ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด essay. Many good essays use it once or twice at most, because an opinion essay is already understood to be your opinion: ์ฒญ์†Œ๋…„์˜ ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ๋ฌด์กฐ๊ฑด ๋ง‰์•„์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค needs no subject at all. ํ•„์ž ("the writer") is mainly for newspaper columns.

Is it bad to write fewer than 600 or more than 700 characters?

Stay inside the range. The answer grid only gives you roughly 700 squares, so running long is physically limited; the far more common problem is an unfinished essay that stops at 400 characters because the writer ran out of time. That's why the five-minute outline matters โ€” and why many test-takers do question 54 before 53 to protect the bigger task. Try both orders in practice tests and see which suits you.

What if I have no strong opinion on the topic?

You don't need a sincere conviction โ€” you need a clear, defensible one. Choose the side you can find the most reasons and examples for, even if you'd be more nuanced in real life. A balanced "both sides have merits, so a gradual approach is best" conclusion is fine too, as long as it is stated clearly.

Writing an argument in a second language is hard because you're juggling ideas, grammar and structure all at once โ€” it's normal for your first practice essays to feel clumsy and take far too long. That's not a sign you've plateaued; it's what building a new skill feels like. Write one paragraph a day, and within a few weeks the connectors and sentence endings will start arriving on their own, leaving your attention free for the ideas.

๐ŸŒŸ Going Further

Challenge 1 (TOPIK 54): Write the full essay on the smartphone prompt above using the outline, 600โ€“700 characters in ํ•œ๋‹ค์ฒด. Then count: does each guiding question have its own paragraph? Does every paragraph open with a connector?

Challenge 2 (speaking): Pick a topic โ€” ์žฌํƒ๊ทผ๋ฌด, ์ฃผ 4์ผ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ œ or ๋ฐ˜๋ ค๋™๋ฌผ ๋™๋ฐ˜ ์‹๋‹น โ€” and record a one-minute opinion in ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค์ฒด that contains a claim, two reasons, an example and a concession (๋ฌผ๋ก  โ€ฆ ์ง€๋งŒ).

๐Ÿ”ฎ Looking Ahead

You may have noticed that almost all the essay vocabulary in this lesson โ€” ์ฃผ์žฅ, ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ, ์ƒ์‚ฐ์„ฑ, ํšจ์œจ, ๋‹จ๊ณ„์  โ€” is Sino-Korean. In Lesson 23: Sino-Korean Roots you'll learn to break these words into their building blocks (ํ•™, ์ƒ, ๋Œ€, ๊ตญ, ์ธโ€ฆ) and the prefixes and suffixes that attach to them (-์ž, -์„ฑ, -ํ™”, ๋ถˆ-, ๋ฌด-), so you can guess the meaning of words you've never seen before.